Leo's Post on Tuesday, 7 March 2017

On the 25th of February I Went to watch Ashley do Canoe Polo at pandora pond. She lives in Palmerston North with Stephan,Lars and Shannon. While I was waiting I went and had a little play in the water with my Dads Body Board. My Mum saw a big wibit I wanted to go on to it so I lined up. Then it our was turn it,it was fun. Finally I watched her play they tied.

In writing we are learning to write recounts.
Something I did well was using ‘w’ details in my opening.
Something that I need to work on is using interesting vocabulary.